Score: 9

"lies"

submission: Sex in a Bathroom

date: April 29, 2008

ive had sex in a bathroom, and i swear to god, it sounded NOTHING like this, this is a brutal dramatization of the real thing

anyways

songs pretty awesome, sounds like theres alot of FL sytrus instruments in there
if you are going to use em, may i suggest at least messing with them enough so they cant be noticed?

but aside from that, you did a very good job of combining the intsruments to sound good, the build through the song sucks after the intro, but the fact that it sounds great makes up for it

also, the drums need to change at some point

all in all... keep up the good work, you have the potential for great musicings

Score: 10

"...my god"

submission: Spk*) - Lol I Maked Beat ^^

date: April 29, 2008

this song is amazing

what the hell is that acidy dropy noise that you used for the lead

Score: 6

"hahaha"

submission: SpK*) - :: Inside//Out ::

date: April 29, 2008

are where are most of the samples from? i recognise the computer error one, the breakbeat drums one, and one that i dont know how to explain

though you did make it all sound cool together, you should have at least made it pretend to be a song by have an instrument play with it, maybe a midi guitar

keep up the ... good work

Score: 7

"ok,, so"

submission: Mental Floss

date: April 29, 2008

sounds nice and pretty,
the piano that plays less notes should be less compressed, because it sounds illy when the reverb is trying to hold a note

aside from that, and the fact the open high hat could use a little higher eq at 5khz, this song is pretty nice and simple

i like how the drums come in and fit perfectly with the rest of the song

also, slight flaw with the repeditivity, this sound would have been just fine at 1:50 timelength or so

Score: 9

"well"

submission: MY PET GOAT

date: April 29, 2008

pretty awesome, you just need to work on mixing

compress your voice more
eq the crash's 4800+ hz up more
pan the shaker so you can put more around 1500 hz
reverb the bg vox more
have the guitar/bass eqed up more and louder for some of the parts where you werent singing and it wasnt
was that chorus or flange at the end that was sounding all wobbly?

Score: 9

"well"

submission: (WiP) Fractal_[Shattered+Mix]

date: April 29, 2008

your song making skills have always been amazing, ill give you that

but

you tend to always clip all your bass, kinda ruining it, im not sure if you like it like that or whatever, im not here to judge, just reveiwhope you fix this with your later songs, excitement is still my fav, i recently suggested it be used in a pico day film, so hopefully you get some publicity

Score: 7

"well"

submission: TANKMEN!

date: April 22, 2008

slappy snare thing is too panned to the right, but everything else is good

Score: 6

"alright"

submission: [LR] Pointless Beat

date: April 5, 2008

meh, for starters, BUT

if you want to work on music, heres some suggestions (keep in mind im not very good)

dont build slow, it is a talent that takes a lot of practice to do, you should just into the song pretty early

you need an instrument

maybe two

even drum and bass has the reece eq'ed pretty high, as to make it take up the higher bandwiths

layer kicks in order to make it not sound like the generic stock kick

this can also work with claps and snare, and hi hat (claps and snare can even layer together, hi hats are a little more difficult to do, and may involve compression)

drum beat was nice, ieven if it lacked variety, but the bass part that comes in seems off beat at first, when it fully plays, it sounds nice, but you dont want anything to pull the rythm away, as it demolishes the song

Score: 8

"good FL work"

submission: Phendrana Drifts-Metroid Prime

date: April 4, 2008

but when you use the fruity keys, you cant make the volume go much higher than it is, because for some reason it destorts REALLY easily, which i can tell you did

Score: 7

"dare i say..."

submission: Goofing off

date: April 4, 2008

that this song needs more yiff?

anyways, its nice

liked the random low horn sound that happens at the end

main issues are using crap stock kick, not eqing, and using too generic of instruments, you should be layering if you want to use those kind of things, has a good melody though,. and potential