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i liked the art, and the victory was funny, but got repetitive
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definately an improvement from the last one, good job.
cant wait to see the next one.
you covered everything much faster, and even added in how to use automation clips. haha, i wish i saw this a week or two ago, i only recently learned about auto clips, i was having to use formulae controllers (if you go to my song Hind D, you will see a big rant i had about it)
also, i never noticed that create automation clip button, that is going to make everything i do alot faster, thanks man.
things to improve on: voice is still pretty quiet, if i were you, i would record voice afterwards, and add it in, that way everything is quick and too the point, and you can set the exact volume you want.
keep up the good work, and let me know when you make the next one.
Author's Response:
yea lol i found out about automation clips not that long ago i think
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pretty random
try not to clip all your vocals when recording yelling though
the beggining story was pretty funny
and would it anger you if i didnt know wii's were sold out everywhere until reading your description?
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one thing i would suggest on your animations is to make the character move more, when he was bobbing his head, only his faace moved, even tweening his head up and down could have made a big improvement.
also, it would have been funny if it ended when is star paower ran out, and he would be all sad and back to dull regular guitar hero
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sorry, but with a song loop that short, you gotta make sure it loops properly, it was runnign tat like 15/16 time, ow my ears and brain
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, but I think is a bit "extreme" to give us 0 just for the music.
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"Dont know if you will ever read this, but whatever"
alright where should i start. lets do the beginning
funny intro, have a little camera pause with green static, timed with the music, very random, but kinda neat. i was actually supprised how all 3 sports gear guys having the same voice was fine, it kinda made them more stereotyped as a group.
I didnt like 2 main things around this time, one was the fact you used a song with words in it during a scene with talking (who am i kidding, tankman is all dialog), the other thing i didnt like was the guy with night vision goggles. his voice annoyed me, and the worst part was when he got hit by the knife, his scream sounded just like his voice, kinda emphasised how weird his voice was.
the chace scene was nice, good drawing of the tank at a cool angle, this part wasnt bad, either than the captains voice started sounding different, which was weird (you get lazy at recording?) and also, the penut butter and jelly sandwiches line was pretty bad, just the way you announciated it made it sound like you were trying too hard. one last thing i didnt like was the pythagoras's theorem line, not only was it way to long to catch on to me, it had nothing to do with the situation, seeing as they needed their shot to go further, it seemed to be aimed propperly
alright, i really liked the line "awh we shanked it" it made me laugh pretty good, also, graphics are alot better than the first, i like the mountains and the tables especially, the mouth on the captain when they are on the tank at some points is kid of weird, but overall barely noticable. I liked the sports gear guys, simply because it was using the tankmen style on other things, which is a style i like.
some things about the overall video:
You say you had some issues with this video, is it because it isnt the same setup as the other tankmen videos? mainly, your other ones have 2 storylines going back and forth. (well, 1 and .5) the best part of these is when you go from one to the other, and take a few words from the one groups last sentence, and put it on the first sentence of the next line, i really like this style, it keeps the video clever, allowing you to put simpler jokes in easily (like references to 80's movies). Also, this video was much different, simply cause there was action and movement, in the others, characters only really move to express emotions, asnd camera only moves for emphases.
Alright, i rewatched it, just cause.. iunno, couple other things i got to say
i hate the sound of the gun steve uses to shoot the sports armour guy, sounds like a rock landing in water.
i only hate the night vision guy's voice in the last part before he gets hit with the knife
i like the "hey, whats a berd?"
"fuckn"
..thats it, oh, what framerate do you use, its nice and smooth, but not nauseating like lots of peoples 708 fps videos
Author's Response:
i use 30 fps like tv. (ok tv is 29.97 but god dammit dont get me into explaining that silliness)
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i dont get it, very un exciting, but the animation was good
you wanted critisism? only things i could say would be the tweening on the repo man as he walked would have used a little more work, and the line on the top of the cows neck moved poorly sometimes.
good animation though, keep fightin the good fight
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sidechaining, eh?
wow, learn something new every day.
when I ,mix in my kick, i usually have a peack controller control the lower end of my paramic EQ for the bass, I thought i was being clever, but i guess it is pretty much sidechaining.
Shit, i want to get a bunch of people together and make a FL tutorial for NG, cause everyone has different little techniques, and everyone could basically learn from everyone else, as well as teach others how to do stuff. eh? eh?
Author's Response:
Yeah, Sidechaining is a pretty widely known technique. I'm glad you learned something :)
An FL Collab Flash would rule.
Thanks for reviewing!
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better than some
move your mouth away from the microphone a bit, you can increase volume once it is on your computer
its johnny utah, not jhonny utah
Author's Response:
eh.... ok.... i know it wasnt jhonny, i just started this kind of thing with the halloween edition...
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sooo broken
bomb game doesnt work for shit, most of the bombs dont hurt you, or get effected by bullets.
walking animation fucked
walking is way too slow
battles are boring
but good attempt, you definately have the right idea
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