Score: 8

"well"

submission: Mouse.

date: July 22, 2008

just thought i would let you know there are 2 ways to prevent cheating, kinda just made them up on the spot so i dont know how well they would work out

1. record the distance between where the mouse is, and where the mouse was last frame:
var speed = Math.sqrt(thex,they);
if(speed>MAXSPEED){
cheat = true;
}
var thex = _root._xmouse;
var they = _root._ymouse
of course on load thex and they are 0, and you have to determine a maximum acceleration that someone could achieve with their mouse without hitting a wall
(shit, no clue if you guys understand that, engineering student talking here)

2. much easier

have invisible checkpoints along the correct path that are pretty big, but need to be hit in order for you to be able to win, wow, why did I bother saying the first idea...

Score: 9

"awww"

submission: xXDarnells TimeXx

date: April 30, 2008

the song cut out right before the chorus, thats my favourite part of that song

anyway, animation was pretty good, parts of the motion needed a little bit more character emphisis, and parts with no face were confusing, but you did a damn good job drawing hands

and your comments has three N's too many

keep up the good work

Score: 9

"nice"

submission: I hate MAC ads

date: April 29, 2008

nice little animation, art was nice, lip syncing was amazing, especially with the penguin

two things that bothered me though:
penguin was blurry in first shot, but mouth wasn't
the hiss removal on the voice madee them sound hollow, they needed a hint or reverb or chorus to sound a little more full (if you did add chorus, then they needed reverb, but just a tiny sliver of it)

keep up the good work

Score: 10

"Nice"

submission: Raise to Review Mod V1.5

date: April 5, 2008

Even thought the game wasnt very fun, i quite enjoy the music... hahaha

im very thankful you used my song in your submission, i guess you hear and reveiw all my stuff anyway

but yeah, i guess i dont really have anything to say

well, except:

word

Score: 8

"grr"

submission: I Am Metal Slug

date: April 3, 2008

the easter bunny would be very dissapointed

Score: 7

"well"

submission: The Rise of a Knight

date: March 21, 2008

fun game

no pause button

hitboxes were crap

ending was odd

Score: 8

"MUCH BETTER"

submission: How to use FL Studio 7

date: February 9, 2008

definately an improvement from the last one, good job.
cant wait to see the next one.

you covered everything much faster, and even added in how to use automation clips. haha, i wish i saw this a week or two ago, i only recently learned about auto clips, i was having to use formulae controllers (if you go to my song Hind D, you will see a big rant i had about it)

also, i never noticed that create automation clip button, that is going to make everything i do alot faster, thanks man.

things to improve on: voice is still pretty quiet, if i were you, i would record voice afterwards, and add it in, that way everything is quick and too the point, and you can set the exact volume you want.

keep up the good work, and let me know when you make the next one.

Score: 0

"GAHH"

submission: AoD: Survival

date: January 31, 2008

sorry, but with a song loop that short, you gotta make sure it loops properly, it was runnign tat like 15/16 time, ow my ears and brain

Score: 8

"Dont know if you will ever read this, but whatever"

submission: TANKMEN 2

date: January 29, 2008

alright where should i start. lets do the beginning

funny intro, have a little camera pause with green static, timed with the music, very random, but kinda neat. i was actually supprised how all 3 sports gear guys having the same voice was fine, it kinda made them more stereotyped as a group.
I didnt like 2 main things around this time, one was the fact you used a song with words in it during a scene with talking (who am i kidding, tankman is all dialog), the other thing i didnt like was the guy with night vision goggles. his voice annoyed me, and the worst part was when he got hit by the knife, his scream sounded just like his voice, kinda emphasised how weird his voice was.
the chace scene was nice, good drawing of the tank at a cool angle, this part wasnt bad, either than the captains voice started sounding different, which was weird (you get lazy at recording?) and also, the penut butter and jelly sandwiches line was pretty bad, just the way you announciated it made it sound like you were trying too hard. one last thing i didnt like was the pythagoras's theorem line, not only was it way to long to catch on to me, it had nothing to do with the situation, seeing as they needed their shot to go further, it seemed to be aimed propperly

alright, i really liked the line "awh we shanked it" it made me laugh pretty good, also, graphics are alot better than the first, i like the mountains and the tables especially, the mouth on the captain when they are on the tank at some points is kid of weird, but overall barely noticable. I liked the sports gear guys, simply because it was using the tankmen style on other things, which is a style i like.

some things about the overall video:

You say you had some issues with this video, is it because it isnt the same setup as the other tankmen videos? mainly, your other ones have 2 storylines going back and forth. (well, 1 and .5) the best part of these is when you go from one to the other, and take a few words from the one groups last sentence, and put it on the first sentence of the next line, i really like this style, it keeps the video clever, allowing you to put simpler jokes in easily (like references to 80's movies). Also, this video was much different, simply cause there was action and movement, in the others, characters only really move to express emotions, asnd camera only moves for emphases.

Alright, i rewatched it, just cause.. iunno, couple other things i got to say
i hate the sound of the gun steve uses to shoot the sports armour guy, sounds like a rock landing in water.
i only hate the night vision guy's voice in the last part before he gets hit with the knife
i like the "hey, whats a berd?"
"fuckn"

..thats it, oh, what framerate do you use, its nice and smooth, but not nauseating like lots of peoples 708 fps videos

Score: 10

"nice."

submission: FL Studio Trance D/B Tut!

date: January 27, 2008

sidechaining, eh?
wow, learn something new every day.

when I ,mix in my kick, i usually have a peack controller control the lower end of my paramic EQ for the bass, I thought i was being clever, but i guess it is pretty much sidechaining.

Shit, i want to get a bunch of people together and make a FL tutorial for NG, cause everyone has different little techniques, and everyone could basically learn from everyone else, as well as teach others how to do stuff. eh? eh?