Dont know if you will ever read this, but whatever
alright where should i start. lets do the beginning
funny intro, have a little camera pause with green static, timed with the music, very random, but kinda neat. i was actually supprised how all 3 sports gear guys having the same voice was fine, it kinda made them more stereotyped as a group.
I didnt like 2 main things around this time, one was the fact you used a song with words in it during a scene with talking (who am i kidding, tankman is all dialog), the other thing i didnt like was the guy with night vision goggles. his voice annoyed me, and the worst part was when he got hit by the knife, his scream sounded just like his voice, kinda emphasised how weird his voice was.
the chace scene was nice, good drawing of the tank at a cool angle, this part wasnt bad, either than the captains voice started sounding different, which was weird (you get lazy at recording?) and also, the penut butter and jelly sandwiches line was pretty bad, just the way you announciated it made it sound like you were trying too hard. one last thing i didnt like was the pythagoras's theorem line, not only was it way to long to catch on to me, it had nothing to do with the situation, seeing as they needed their shot to go further, it seemed to be aimed propperly
alright, i really liked the line "awh we shanked it" it made me laugh pretty good, also, graphics are alot better than the first, i like the mountains and the tables especially, the mouth on the captain when they are on the tank at some points is kid of weird, but overall barely noticable. I liked the sports gear guys, simply because it was using the tankmen style on other things, which is a style i like.
some things about the overall video:
You say you had some issues with this video, is it because it isnt the same setup as the other tankmen videos? mainly, your other ones have 2 storylines going back and forth. (well, 1 and .5) the best part of these is when you go from one to the other, and take a few words from the one groups last sentence, and put it on the first sentence of the next line, i really like this style, it keeps the video clever, allowing you to put simpler jokes in easily (like references to 80's movies). Also, this video was much different, simply cause there was action and movement, in the others, characters only really move to express emotions, asnd camera only moves for emphases.
Alright, i rewatched it, just cause.. iunno, couple other things i got to say
i hate the sound of the gun steve uses to shoot the sports armour guy, sounds like a rock landing in water.
i only hate the night vision guy's voice in the last part before he gets hit with the knife
i like the "hey, whats a berd?"
..thats it, oh, what framerate do you use, its nice and smooth, but not nauseating like lots of peoples 708 fps videos