to be honest, your WaB videos have gotten kinda, well, dumb, but that song at the end was fucking awesome!
it was like i was watching someone play a sega genesis game remake, or something, with the oldschool style, but the good quality graphics
I dont know if you want to bother, but i think that could make a pretty sweet game, something like that wouldnt even take much programming...
i wasnt expecting it to br THAT long, that was pretty awesome, you had some really good angles and animations in that, i was thuroughly impressed.
was that one guy supposed to be drinking beer or piss?
and i liked the epic shape tweens on steve's mouth when his balls were cut.
and the other tankgirl picture you drew for the second magazine.
did i hear a bit of weezer in there? for shame
the song cut out right before the chorus, thats my favourite part of that song
anyway, animation was pretty good, parts of the motion needed a little bit more character emphisis, and parts with no face were confusing, but you did a damn good job drawing hands
and your comments has three N's too many
keep up the good work
lolz you rated my comments too XD
yeah i know, ithe original plan was to animate ALL THE SONG, but the time wasnt on my side...
nice little animation, art was nice, lip syncing was amazing, especially with the penguin
two things that bothered me though:
penguin was blurry in first shot, but mouth wasn't
the hiss removal on the voice madee them sound hollow, they needed a hint or reverb or chorus to sound a little more full (if you did add chorus, then they needed reverb, but just a tiny sliver of it)
Hm, yeah, I guess the audio could still use work, but at least it's loud enough. I'm still working on perfecting the audio, so I'll take your comments into consideration. Thanks for watching!
Oh, and I only blurred the penguin's body because in most of the Linux logo's I've seen, the penguin's body is kind of blurred. I didn't blur the face because I was worried about it lagging.
the easter bunny would be very dissapointed
indeed he would.
i liked it
nice art, and i liked how everything that was the white just looked as the background, so the snow looked neat
only flaws were, one, it ended suddenly, like, itdidnt show them enjoying the apple, the music just kinda stopped mid clap
the wood had lines where you could see it was the beginning of another bitmap, made it look bad
try not to clip all your vocals when recording yelling though
the beggining story was pretty funny
and would it anger you if i didnt know wii's were sold out everywhere until reading your description?
one thing i would suggest on your animations is to make the character move more, when he was bobbing his head, only his faace moved, even tweening his head up and down could have made a big improvement.
also, it would have been funny if it ended when is star paower ran out, and he would be all sad and back to dull regular guitar hero
Dont know if you will ever read this, but whatever
alright where should i start. lets do the beginning
funny intro, have a little camera pause with green static, timed with the music, very random, but kinda neat. i was actually supprised how all 3 sports gear guys having the same voice was fine, it kinda made them more stereotyped as a group.
I didnt like 2 main things around this time, one was the fact you used a song with words in it during a scene with talking (who am i kidding, tankman is all dialog), the other thing i didnt like was the guy with night vision goggles. his voice annoyed me, and the worst part was when he got hit by the knife, his scream sounded just like his voice, kinda emphasised how weird his voice was.
the chace scene was nice, good drawing of the tank at a cool angle, this part wasnt bad, either than the captains voice started sounding different, which was weird (you get lazy at recording?) and also, the penut butter and jelly sandwiches line was pretty bad, just the way you announciated it made it sound like you were trying too hard. one last thing i didnt like was the pythagoras's theorem line, not only was it way to long to catch on to me, it had nothing to do with the situation, seeing as they needed their shot to go further, it seemed to be aimed propperly
alright, i really liked the line "awh we shanked it" it made me laugh pretty good, also, graphics are alot better than the first, i like the mountains and the tables especially, the mouth on the captain when they are on the tank at some points is kid of weird, but overall barely noticable. I liked the sports gear guys, simply because it was using the tankmen style on other things, which is a style i like.
some things about the overall video:
You say you had some issues with this video, is it because it isnt the same setup as the other tankmen videos? mainly, your other ones have 2 storylines going back and forth. (well, 1 and .5) the best part of these is when you go from one to the other, and take a few words from the one groups last sentence, and put it on the first sentence of the next line, i really like this style, it keeps the video clever, allowing you to put simpler jokes in easily (like references to 80's movies). Also, this video was much different, simply cause there was action and movement, in the others, characters only really move to express emotions, asnd camera only moves for emphases.
Alright, i rewatched it, just cause.. iunno, couple other things i got to say
i hate the sound of the gun steve uses to shoot the sports armour guy, sounds like a rock landing in water.
i only hate the night vision guy's voice in the last part before he gets hit with the knife
i like the "hey, whats a berd?"
..thats it, oh, what framerate do you use, its nice and smooth, but not nauseating like lots of peoples 708 fps videos
i use 30 fps like tv. (ok tv is 29.97 but god dammit dont get me into explaining that silliness)
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