alright
meh, for starters, BUT
if you want to work on music, heres some suggestions (keep in mind im not very good)
dont build slow, it is a talent that takes a lot of practice to do, you should just into the song pretty early
you need an instrument
maybe two
even drum and bass has the reece eq'ed pretty high, as to make it take up the higher bandwiths
layer kicks in order to make it not sound like the generic stock kick
this can also work with claps and snare, and hi hat (claps and snare can even layer together, hi hats are a little more difficult to do, and may involve compression)
drum beat was nice, ieven if it lacked variety, but the bass part that comes in seems off beat at first, when it fully plays, it sounds nice, but you dont want anything to pull the rythm away, as it demolishes the song