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well

pretty awesome, you just need to work on mixing

compress your voice more
eq the crash's 4800+ hz up more
pan the shaker so you can put more around 1500 hz
reverb the bg vox more
have the guitar/bass eqed up more and louder for some of the parts where you werent singing and it wasnt
was that chorus or flange at the end that was sounding all wobbly?

BreakingFaces responds:

Sorry dude, but your lingo is just too technical, I don't understand.

well

slappy snare thing is too panned to the right, but everything else is good

SkeezyForHeezy responds:

Thanks B!
I don't know exactly how the snare got all the way to the right. I definitely didn't mean for it to be there, and it definitely is. Oh well.
Thanks for the kind words.

alright

meh, for starters, BUT

if you want to work on music, heres some suggestions (keep in mind im not very good)

dont build slow, it is a talent that takes a lot of practice to do, you should just into the song pretty early

you need an instrument

maybe two

even drum and bass has the reece eq'ed pretty high, as to make it take up the higher bandwiths

layer kicks in order to make it not sound like the generic stock kick

this can also work with claps and snare, and hi hat (claps and snare can even layer together, hi hats are a little more difficult to do, and may involve compression)

drum beat was nice, ieven if it lacked variety, but the bass part that comes in seems off beat at first, when it fully plays, it sounds nice, but you dont want anything to pull the rythm away, as it demolishes the song

Little-Radiodemon responds:

I was seeing what I could do more than anything, just kind of messing around with diffrent things. I don't know what I'm doing with music, I'm not very good at putting things together, it all just seems kind of, eh, dunno what to say. Would be nice if I could do half they things you mentioned but I don't really get what you're suggesting.

The other thing with this is I made it with a beat program and a sound recorder, not just one standalone audio creation program, so putting it together was kind of hard, making a mistake ment starting all over again.

good FL work

but when you use the fruity keys, you cant make the volume go much higher than it is, because for some reason it destorts REALLY easily, which i can tell you did

dare i say...

that this song needs more yiff?

anyways, its nice

liked the random low horn sound that happens at the end

main issues are using crap stock kick, not eqing, and using too generic of instruments, you should be layering if you want to use those kind of things, has a good melody though,. and potential

nice

i like the metal version, but there is just one little thing, when the second guitar came in, and had the EXACT same distortion, the rest felt kinda hokey to me

sure distortion is a great thing, but when a lead comes in, it should be a little cleaner

and the background one should be deeper, almost like a bass, but a heavy guitar

well

song is reallt made nicely, but the actual mixing is slightly lacking, as the highs arent really up there at all, which is depressing because this song has awesome potential

kinda sounds like you were saving the eq room for that once synth that doesnt make a very good lead... but i dunno

may i suggest something

the mixing in this was rather well done, i would have eqed the guitars a little hhigher at the beginning, just to hold interest, but the main part of the song is great

you need to split your vocal track into 2 channels, and have one eqed higher and one lower. take off the some chorus on the lower one and add some reverb to the lower one

for the last part of vocals i liked the panning, and the reverb, but the volume was lacking in parts, and could use more chorus in the highs again

keep up the good work, im impressed with the rest

poop

Shane Jensen @MusicIsBliss

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